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Past, present, future
Make all of your plans as fast as you can
Press on with your insistance on nothing
Keep on dreaming
Flood the malls with your loose change
Water leaks and molds the carpet
Use the stench to wake up
Move forward
Demands placed and given up in an instant
Wills no longer clash
They are just written
The agression withheld and expelled only as remarks
Just an endless stream of letters
Write right or wrong
The matter is fruitless
Just unthinking and unending as frustrations mount
There never was a begining to it
Just a slow colmunation of events
They all lead to the goal of an army of burnt out husks
Spawn the next generation of all show and no bite
Even the embers of ideals will lose their glow after a time
©2005-2009 ~DigitalTrowa
:icondigitaltrowa:

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I don't know. As always, title help is wanted. Really, any kind of feedback makes me all happy inside. Just one of those angery at the world days I guess.

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It certanly has the anger you mentioned. I like how you came off as a pissed off person, but didnt use the word "fuck" every two seconds like some idiots do. (They think just by cussing, it proves they're angry.) Really, cussing is an art (as ridiculous as that sounds). But when the right profanities are placed, it flows like a river. River of wine. all red and cool...... eh, sorry, I digress. I like this peice, it lacks a bit of finesse, but other than that, its very very good.

--
We're afraid of who we really are
We're afraid of the things we never really show
I'm Sorry That I Pushed Things So Far


Just smile and nod, and I'll tell you everything will be alright. -Jesse(>.")>
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Awesome write i definately enjoyed reading this ill watch you and favorite this. :+devwatch:

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I've got more wit, a better kiss, a hotter touch, a better fuck
Than any girl you'll ever meet, sweetie you had me
Morbid Love

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